Gavin, Thanks for your constructive comment. I never did care much for or worry about industry standards. My goal is to tell the story and my listeners love it Still I can see your point. I do like the artsy famine in family, because a family going through divorce is usually starving for some love from both sides. On this I can also understand some folks needs for simpler word formations. My songs are also poetry which gives me two markets to work with. Some of them have also become short fiction pieces that I have published. There is a method to my madness.Thanks as always for being a listener who offers stellar critiques as well as songs

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