Yeah, id have to agree with Ben.

It's also not very believable in that the rhymes like .

In the nude acting lewd....

So don’t be begging my pardon
in our garden of love,

Not understanding the family tree bit

Basically it's a guy loses love, sees her with another guy, and predicts what will happen to him.

Common theme, you tried to make it different.

But rhyming just to rhyme is not a good rule.

Say what you have to say, rhyme later..

Good to see you posting here, you should respond to other songs here, not just your own