Originally Posted by MFB III
It was not your aggressive critique that I objected to as much as the tedious attack on Japov that you and Bennash unleashed on my comment box. Most of which had nothing to do with my song. Every writer has a style unique to other styles. You are into conversational lyrics. Good for you. I actually perused some of your songs. I concentrate on telling stories, using some word play and my listeners and followers come back again and again for those stories. What might seem trite to you is very entertaining to the non- musical masses. They are who I write for, not other musicians who feel they must follow industry standards i.e. conversational lyrics. Then you or Bennash attacked me for not posting comments without even researching the fact that I have posted hundreds of comments on JPF. Others who have been here as long as I have will attest to that fact. I hope this helps as it is in a conversational style.


It was not an agressive critique. Not even close.

Japov said don't listen to them assholes . Asvif we conspired to attack you

He has been off the site and back every day, tries to make the forum a religious political rally

Apparently he ran Marty off the site.

Your late to the party you dint know what preceded what.

Look we need more people posting songs. This is a weak song,v doesn't mean your not going to write good stuff.

Stop worrying about everybody else, the matter at hand was this song.

Last edited by Fdemetrio; 11/10/24 03:15 PM.