Originally Posted by Fdemetrio
I don't have a problem with it, it,"s art.

Personally, I think you should use one person's thoughts, you seem to switch around.

The guy In the first verse is more apropo to our shooting problems.

One perspective, one guy talking, that be my approach.

But I could see this being half rap half rock, and some rapper coming I'm in parts.

Can you tell me where it gets confusing, Dom?
Or, more importantly, what perspective I wrote the lyric from?