Originally Posted by Steve Altonian
Irwin,

I like so much of this and it is feel good pop song, This is different from your other stuff & I see growth as a Producer. But your question means you have your doubts...

To answer your original question: The production is clear,& the recording is crisp...Great job..I think maybe the track is missing some counter melodies....In this type iof music maybe a couple stops with the drums earler than you did, to break up the monotany a tad would help...This would define the Arrangement a little more IMO. I think it needs a couple more instruments doing ear candy without stepping on your arrangement. I would have looked for some poppy pads/chimes/bells combo maybe...

I do think you guys let a couple thing go vocally that maybe could have been fixed by the vocalist, or used some pitch correction software.

The time of your track could be cut 2 minutes easy...I think the track would be more effective shorter.

Good up tempo Pop song...That's what I heard..Tracks are getting better Irwin for sure


Hi Steve,

I know that there is a lot more than can be done with this production", but I was not exactly sure what else to do and I really would like the song to become something people will listen, so yes! I had some doubts.

It feels so good to know you have notice that I am improving for I do work very hard to produce a pleasing sound to my music productions.

Also their are some awesome song productions that are being done here on this forum too I have heard.

I thank you very much for your comment and input.

Irwin

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