Originally Posted by Fdemetrio
id say you're improving. You're learning how to make a song out of the tools you're using. Before it seemed you were just throwing sampled tracks together

The hook is just as good as anything else in that electronica genre. Yeah I think there is pitch problems with the singer. It sounds like a sampled singer and your probably hitting some bumps with the melody and the chords it's playing.

It's a tough genre you need really good samples and have unlimited choices, but the home stuff is very limited.

One thing I would work on is matching what the track is saying with your lyrics.

Precious moments is a good melodic hook but the music doesn't sound sweet and sentimental, it sounds like a get down and boogie track.

That's called prosody. Something to think about

But you are clearly getting better.


Hi Fdemetrio,

You have took the time to listen to my song so I'll like to say thanks for your in depth input! I really appreciate it! I’ll see what I can do.

I really want persons to enjoy what they hear when they listen to the songs I produce so your suggestions means a lot to me. .

Irwin

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