id say you're improving. You're learning how to make a song out of the tools you're using. Before it seemed you were just throwing sampled tracks together

The hook is just as good as anything else in that electronica genre. Yeah I think there is pitch problems with the singer. It sounds like a sampled singer and your probably hitting some bumps with the melody and the chords it's playing.

It's a tough genre you need really good samples and have unlimited choices, but the home stuff is very limited.

One thing I would work on is matching what the track is saying with your lyrics.

Precious moments is a good melodic hook but the music doesn't sound sweet and sentimental, it sounds like a get down and boogie track.

Something to think about

But you are clearly getting better.

Last edited by Fdemetrio; 06/20/20 07:43 PM.