Hey, Gavin,

I like this one a lot . . . catchy. You write some really genuine, real world feel lyrics—and while you tend to undersell your vocal efforts (and you shouldn't, IMHO)—they always fit and compliment your tunes. Which is to say, the vocal here is just fine . . . sweet. Not sure I’m in love with the choice of sax on this one—seems a bit off the mood of the song . . . but even so, it works well enough. (And in my limited experience, I find the horns in BIAB, if that's what you are using, pull off better solos than the guitars for some reason). So don’t kill yourself changing it out . . . it’s good. Love that last verse, Gavin. Nice writing!

My best to you,

Deej