Yeah, i think without a context...what its being used for its hard to give feedback. It probably could be used in a movie sequence, where there are no lines and the viewer is just watching the screen as it plays. But without seeing that, its hard to know what would fit.

This is the kind of thing that needs a visual

not crazy about all of those dissonant chords, the piano chords may be too much.

But in a film or documentary, they would likely only use a snippet of it.