FWIW, we feel that redemption would be somewhat contrary to the story as established in multiple verses. Perhaps too sudden.

We like it and the somewhat haunting feel all through. If you guys ever have the opportunity to do a more full production we think an instrumental build throughout would be very effective. Nothing too busy or overwrought just the introduction of different tracks as the song progresses.

We enjoyed it...the write and the performance!

J&B


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