Hey Owen,

I liked the lyric and your vocal delivery of the song. After the 2nd chorus I was kinda hoping to hear a new section, maybe a Bridge, but that's just me always thinking more along the lines of commercialism. I find it hard to critique sometimes because I don't know what the writer wants to do with his/her song...is it to pitch for country cuts or is it just writing for themselves etc. Enjoyed listening to your song.