Hi Tom, Wow! Now tell me what you really think! smile

I guess I've written better songs, and worse ones. Some I choose to take to a higher level, others I don't. You've made a few erroneous assumptions here. I wanted and received a simple guitar/vocal for this song. I'll take it farther at some point, not with the intention to "pitch" to anyone though. More because it pleases me. I like it and to get beyond my own gate keeper is a major accomplishment for me.

I had to talk Kurt into singing for me but I'm grateful that he agreed to do it. He suggested another guitar player because he didn't feel his playing was good enough and I was also grateful for that. It's an excellent guitar track that will be built upon at a later date, making the instrumentation more "interesting".

I'm not sorry that you don't like my song. You feel what you feel, but I am sorry that you think you have to defend your negative critique. As the song goes, you can't please everyone so you've got to please yourself, which is what I'm doing with my writing. Why do you write, and how is that working out for you?

Ricki




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