I love this. The vocal, melody and lyrics.
Reminds me of something Steve Earle would come up with.
Production wise, if it was me I would simplify the guitar rhythm until you get to:
"You’re a dangerous girl ..." where you can bring in the steady rhythm and another instrument (maybe organ, bass and simple drum pattern).

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