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WHEN?
by JAPOV - 04/23/26 11:28 PM
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Ricki,
Lyrically it's a good mix. The verses have interesting statements that are somewhat vague, but imply enough of a story to allow the listener to fill in the blanks themselves -however they might. Then, both the chorus and bridge have a solid, single thought/meaning.
The acoustic rhythm works nicely. You could add a solid, rock bass line and a hard-hitting drum pattern - steady kick/snare - with a full Eagles-type harmony on the chorus and bridge and it would soar...
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