Originally Posted by Lisa Gundling

I don't want to hear a song about a 25-year-old man kissing the dry, cracked lips of an old lady with bad breath who burps a lot.

It's perfectly legal to be an old lady with dry, cracked lips and bad breath and a burping problem, but does that mean that I don't have the right to complain about the song? You could argue it's age discrimination ... but who cares.


Dang Lisa, I just spent six hours on my new song, have to shelve it now...

At 40 years his senior
She couldn't but deny
While his lips were soft and tender,
Her's were cracked and dry.

anyone want to add to it...bad breath and burping as a 2nd verse or chorus...
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Interesting topic with its ebbs and flows.

God Bless Roy and Helen

Last edited by Roy Cooper; 03/27/15 05:29 AM.

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