Frankly, I am appalled by the responses. If I recall, we were asked to listen and give an opinion. And in my opinion, this song (writer/producer/lyricist...) has their pulse on TODAY'S music and, as is, would make a considerable impact on the pop charts. I am not sure we JPF peeps are used to hearing something so polished and "radio ready." And since it is geared towards the youth, it would rarely be anyone's "cup o tea" on THIS site. That being said (and keeping my personal tastes at bay) this song is one or two tweaks away from being an undeniable "hit" in many, many musical circles today.

Over half of todays top 50 pop hits have this signature.

Get this out there, find the right people and enjoy the ride.....I'll say what we here are not likely to say, and it's a first for me......You have a hit song, Greg.....NOW PROMOTE IT!

Good luck and great job!!!

bluesriff


Write on, Man,
Michael W. Brown, f.k.a. "bluesriff"

"The best way to find yourself is to lose yourself in the service of others."
Mahatma Gandhi