Gregory....

This style cannot get the same kind of critique a country tune would get...

I do Country & Christian....I am comfortable in my style & sound. I also kinda' know, what works and doesn't work in my Genres...To crit this would do you a disservice.

But I do try to stay in touch other Genres & with current trends in my own styles and others as well.........

This is good, but is it the best it could be ??? Only you can answer that...To my ears it has the current quality one would look for...Can it break through ? Why not......

I cannot begin to tell you if this is up to par with the Competition in your Genre......I have my immediate thoughts, but they are simply opinions from one not in your Genre.

My best bet is to put it on for my 3 daughters & their friends..I'll know pretty quick where it really stands....

Please the audience first & the writers second, that's kinda where I'm at...I love my fellow writers, but I do not write for them...

See, We as writers fret over every line, syllable, phrasing....
The audience just wants to hear something the can connect with & call their own.

Steve Altonian---"I'll just do my best & let God do the rest"

http://www.stevealtonian.com