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RY X
by Gary E. Andrews - 09/21/26 04:03 PM
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dont tell me ....
dont tell me how i should be
dont tell me how life is
dont tell me anything, oh no !
i, i like to sit and wonder
think about things, clear my mind
id like to be in a happy place
and time .
dont tell me ....
dont tell me how i should be
dont tell me how life is
dont tell me anything, oh no !
make you into a fighter
make you endure hearts on fire
make you run 'til you fall
oh, ill make you crawl .
dont try and change me
ill match your score
my life's not going under anymore
dont tell me ....
dont tell me how i should be
dont tell me how life is
dont tell me anything, oh no !
dont tell me ....
dont tell me how i should be
dont tell me how life is
dont tell me anything, oh no !
( yell ) NO!
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I simply like your style, that's all I can think of as I read this.
Perhaps convert it to
"id like to be in a happy place
and a happy time"
Either way works, whatever you want
Good work, keep at it
Josh Packard
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thanks . and i just wrote it too ! lol i always come to the board click new topic and start writing for someone its easier than paper . ill make a note ( on the comp lol ) of that suggestion and see how it flows . ![[Linked Image]](http://www.justplainfolks.org/ubb/biggrin.gif)
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I, too, like your style. When I started reading this I thought this was about your parents, authority telling you what to do, how to behave, etc. but then this verse threw me:
make you into a fighter
make you endure hearts on fire
make you run 'til you fall
oh, ill make you crawl .
I didn't understand what you're saying here.
I can't offer any suggestions.....keep writing Nikki? Tabbi? Either one.....just keep writing.
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its like a challenge im putting them up to.
its about no one in particular .
thanks .
- tabbi <---
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Hey Tabbi! What genre are you thinking here? This one would sure work as a rocker....I could definitely see Kelly Osbourne doing this believe it or not!! Best of luck with it. Best, Cindy
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yep, its rock . yay ! i love rock music hehe
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