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by bennash - 06/07/26 09:34 PM
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THIS LYRIC HAS BEEN UPDATED - SEE BELOW
YOU KNOW
All it takes is one handshake A truth in the eyes and there's instant connection Who on earth knows how it works But it does and it points us in the right direction
It's true what lovers say And though it sounds like an old cliché You know Without knowing it Your in love And your showing it When you're covered by the warmth of love's golden glow... You know
Bees and birds don't have our words Everything's simple and there's no confusion Black is black and white is white Magic happens with no illusion
It's true what lovers say And though it sounds like an old cliché You know Without knowing it Your in love And your showing it When you're covered by the warmth of love's golden glow... You know
What about emotions?, I hear you say How can we ignore them when they get in the way? Well, offer your heart like it's Valentine's Day You know, you know, you know...
It's true what lovers say And though it sounds like an old cliché You know Without knowing it Your in love And your showing it When you're covered by the warmth of love's golden glow... You know
© 2012 Andy Furlong[b][/b][color:#FF0000][/color]
Last edited by adf; 02/10/12 01:31 PM.
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Andy, I do like the basic simplicity of this one, but it seems a bit preachy, like you're telling someone else about how they do or should feel. Maybe put all except the "What about emotions..." section into first person? I think that would get me involved in your view.
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Pam,
Good point. I like your observations, they help me fine tune. So, what about this version?
I KNOW
All it takes is one handshake A truth in your eyes and there's instant connection Who on earth knows how it works But it does and it points me in the right direction
It's true what lovers say And though it sounds like an old cliché I know Without knowing it I'm in love And I'm showing it When I'm covered by the warmth of love's golden glow... I know
Bees and birds don't have my words Everything's simple and there's no confusion Black is black and white is white Magic happens with no illusion
It's true what lovers say And though it sounds like an old cliché I know Without knowing it I'm in love And I'm showing it When I'm covered by the warmth of love's golden glow... I know
What about emotions?, I hear you say How can we ignore them when they get in the way? I hold your heart, just like it's Valentine's Day I know, I know, I know...
It's true what lovers say And though it sounds like an old cliché I know Without knowing it I'm in love And I'm showing it When I'm covered by the warmth of love's golden glow... I know
© 2012 Andy Furlong
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Wow Andy, That reads even better than I envisioned. Now, for a singer who loves it, right?
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A singer, a singer, my kingdom for a singer!
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