Who's Online Now
7 members (Brian Austin Whitney, Gary E. Andrews, texritter, NicoleRoss, Guy E. Trepanier, 2 invisible), 173,805 guests, and 2,252 robots.
Key: Admin, Global Mod, Mod
Register Today!
Welcome to the Just Plain Folks forums! You are currently viewing our forums as a Guest which gives you limited access to most of our discussions and to other features.

By joining our free community you will have access to post and respond to topics, communicate privately with our users (PM), respond to polls, upload content, and access many other features. Registration is fast, simple, and absolutely free; so please join our community today!
ShoutChat
Comment Guidelines: Do post respectful and insightful comments. Don't flame, hate, spam.
What's Going On
Market Street Cafe, Portsmouth
by Gary E. Andrews - 06/26/26 07:30 PM
Sara Bareilles
by Gary E. Andrews - 06/26/26 06:57 PM
ASCAP & AI
by John Lawrence Schick - 06/26/26 05:46 PM
Alkyone, Greece
by Gary E. Andrews - 06/25/26 11:03 PM
Magi Ensemble
by Gary E. Andrews - 06/25/26 10:41 PM
Elizabeth Cook
by Gary E. Andrews - 06/25/26 09:33 PM
Doug Duffey and BADD
by Gary E. Andrews - 06/25/26 09:23 PM
Courtney Von Drehlel
by Gary E. Andrews - 06/25/26 09:05 PM
The Mysterious Disappearance of Kay-Lynn
by bennash - 06/25/26 07:39 PM
Reitano Vineyards, Live Music Fest
by Gary E. Andrews - 06/25/26 11:54 AM
Danny Golden
by Gary E. Andrews - 06/24/26 11:08 PM
I'm Still Here
by Michael W. Brown - 06/24/26 09:32 PM
Onward Through the Fog
by Michael W. Brown - 06/24/26 09:26 PM
Hold On Moe
by bennash - 06/24/26 07:26 PM
The numbers song
by bennash - 06/24/26 01:58 AM
Scatterbraind!
by Gary E. Andrews - 06/24/26 01:27 AM
Scatterbraind!
by Gary E. Andrews - 06/24/26 01:21 AM
I MISS ME
by Bill Draper - 06/23/26 05:24 PM
New Web Video Series
by Patrick Bryant - 06/23/26 01:17 PM
Just Hobbies
by bennash - 06/23/26 11:41 AM
Heavy Hinges
by Gary E. Andrews - 06/22/26 07:32 PM
Copyrighting AI
by John Lawrence Schick - 06/22/26 06:17 PM
Desperados Bar & Grill, Huntsville
by Gary E. Andrews - 06/21/26 11:44 PM
Sound Haven Festival, Jaceland - Whitwell
by Gary E. Andrews - 06/21/26 11:01 PM
Riot Fest
by Gary E. Andrews - 06/21/26 10:51 PM
Musiversal
by Gary E. Andrews - 06/21/26 06:38 PM
Gigi Perez, Miami
by Gary E. Andrews - 06/20/26 11:21 PM
Gigi Perez, Wallingford
by Gary E. Andrews - 06/20/26 11:18 PM
beabadoobee
by Gary E. Andrews - 06/20/26 09:57 PM
Young The Giant, So. Cal.
by Gary E. Andrews - 06/20/26 05:02 PM
Top Posters
Calvin 19,858
Travis david 12,380
Kevin Emmrich 10,943
Jean Bullock 10,330
Kaley Willow 10,240
Two Singers 9,649
Joice Marie 9,186
Mackie H. 9,003
Fdemetrio 8,961
glynda 8,688
Mike Dunbar 8,574
Tricia Baker 8,318
couchgrouch 8,240
Colin Ward 7,911
Corey 7,357
Sunset Poet 7,108
Vicarn 6,916
Mark Kaufman 6,589
ben willis 6,114
Lynn Orloff 5,788
Louis 5,725
Linda Sings 5,608
KimberlyinNC 5,210
Neil Cotton 4,909
Derek Hines 4,893
DonnaMarilyn 4,700
Blake Hill 4,528
Bob Cushing 4,389
bennash 4,378
Roy Cooper 4,303
MFB III 4,237
Bill Osofsky 4,199
Tom Shea 4,195
Cindy Miller 4,178
TamsNumber4 4,172
nightengale 4,096
E Swartz 4,029
beechnut79 3,878
Caroline 3,865
Kolstad 3,845
Dan Sullivan 3,710
Dottie 3,427
joewatt 3,411
Bill Cooper 3,279
John Hoffman 3,199
Skip Johnson 3,027
Pam Hurley 3,007
Terry G 3,005
PopTodd 2,901
Nigel Quin 2,891
Harriet Ames 2,870
MidniteBob 2,764
Nelson 2,616
Tom Tracy 2,558
Jerry Jakala 2,524
Al Alvarez 2,499
Eric Thome 2,448
Hummingbird 2,401
Stan Loh 2,263
Sam Wilson 2,247
Wendy D 2,236
Judy Hollier 2,232
Erica Ellis 2,202
maccharles 2,134
TrumanCoyote 2,096
Marty Helly 2,041
DukeWill 2,009
floyd jane 1,985
Rob B. 1,926
Clint Anglin 1,904
cindyrella 1,888
David Wright 1,866
Clairejeanne 1,851
Cindy LaRosa 1,824
Ronald Boyt 1,675
Iggy 1,653
VNORTH2 1,651
Noel Downs 1,633
Rick Heenan 1,608
Cal 1,574
GocartMoz 1,559
Jack Swain 1,554
Pete Larsen 1,537
Ann Tygart 1,529
Tom Breshers 1,487
RogerS 1,481
Tom Franz 1,479
David Gill 1,461
IronKnee 1,455
Bill Draper 1,446
Chuck Crowe 1,441
Ralph Blight 1,440
Rick Norton 1,435
Kenneth Cade 1,429
Deej56 1,419
bholt 1,411
Letha Allen 1,409
in2piano 1,404
Stan Simons 1,402
mattbanx 1,384
Jen Shaner 1,373
Charlie Wong 1,347
KevinP 1,324
Vondelle 1,316
Tom W. 1,313
Jan Petter 1,301
scottandrew 1,294
lane1777 1,280
Gerry 1,280
DakLander 1,265
PeteG 1,242
Ian Ferrin 1,235
Glen King 1,214
IdeaGuy 1,209
AaronAuthier 1,177
summeoyo 1,174
ckiphen 1,162
Diane Ewing 1,162
joro 1,082
BobbyJoe 1,075
S.DEE 1,040
yann 1,037
9ne 1,035
WesRyan 1,018
Tony A 1,016
argo 986
peaden 984
90 dB 964
Wolvman 960
Jak Kelly 912
krtinberg 890
Petra 883
RJC 845
Brenda152 840
Nadia 829
ant 798
Juan 797
TKO 784
Dayson 781
frahmes 781
teletwang 762
Irwin 754
Andy Kemp 751
Andy K 750
tbryson 737
Jackie444 731
3daveyO3 704
Dixie 701
Pat Hardy 696
Joy Boy 695
Knute 686
Moosesong 679
Lee Arten 678
Katziis 652
R.T.MOORE 638
quality 637
CG King 622
douglas 621
R&M 614
Mel 614
NaomiSue 601
Shandy 590
Ria 587
TAMERA64 583
qbaum 570
nitepiano 566
pRISCILLA 556
Tink2 553
musica 539
deanbell 528
BB Wilbur 527
RobertK 527
BonzaiWag 523
Roderic 522
goodfolks 499
Zeek 487
Stu 486
Steve P. 481
KathyW 462
allenb 459
MaxG 458
Philjo 454
fanito 448
trush48 448
dmk 442
Rob L 439
arealrush 437
DGR 436
avweek 435
Stephen D 433
Emmy 431
marquez 422
kit 419
Softkrome 417
kyrksongs 415
RRon 408
Laura G. 407
VNORTH 407
Debra 407
eb 406
cuebald 399
EdPerrone 399
Dannyk1 395
Hobart 395
ddreuter 394
Davyboy49 393
Smile 389
GJShades 387
Alek 386
Ezt 384
tone 380
Marla 380
Ann_F 379
iggyiggy 378
coalminer 377
java 374
spidey 371
sweetsong 370
danny 367
Jim Ryan 360
papaG 353
Z - man 350
JamesDF5 348
John K 348
Jaden 344
TheBaz 340
Steggy 339
leif 339
tonedeaf 336
rickwork 334
Eddie Ray 332
Johnboy 328
Bob Lever 328
Helicon1 327
lucian 326
Muskie 321
kc 319
Z. Mulls 318
ptondreau 313
ONOFFON 312
Chris B. 310
trush 304
ed323 297
Ellen M 294
markus-ky 294
lizzorn 291
nicnac49 290
Char 286
ktunes 285
Top Likes Received
bennash 138
Rob B. 90
VNORTH2 68
Previous Thread
Next Thread
Print Thread
Rate Thread
#903911 06/16/11 11:20 AM
Joined: Feb 2011
Posts: 442
D
dmk Offline OP
Serious Contributor
OP Offline
Serious Contributor
D
Joined: Feb 2011
Posts: 442
dan wrote a gem of a song that i immediatly loved and asked for permission to cover,comment if you like.
www.soundclick.com/goodtiller

song for maria by dan sullivan c 2011 (adapted and performed by david michael kissinger)

song for maria

there's a howl'n wind
there's a storm outside
there's a knock'n at the door
please let me in a voice does cry
from a far of foreign shore

i hear the small voice of a child
and he's knock'n on the door
please let me in the poor boy cries
but no one opens the door

chorus:

won't you spare his life sweet Jesus
but if that's not your plan for him
he'll be knock'n on heavens door tonight
won't you please let him in

in a barrio in a border town
eighty passingers were squeezed
into the back of a tractor trailor
along with maria ruiz

well the border patrol saved most of them
but there among the deceased
they found maria with her fingers
still clutching her rosary beads

won't you hear her prayers sweet Jesus
for she's left this world of sin
she'll be knock'n on heavens door tonight
won't you please let her in

break:

won't you hear they're prayers sweet Jesus
cry'n to be let in
there's a howl'n wind
there's a storm outside
here in this world of sin

won't you hear they're prayer's sweet Jesus
cry'n to be let in
there's a howl'n wind
there's a storm outside
won't you let them in

Joined: Jul 2010
Posts: 3,710
Top 100 Poster
Offline
Top 100 Poster
Joined: Jul 2010
Posts: 3,710
Dave, What a beautiful adaptation! I think I now know how Kristofferson must have felt when he first heard one of his demos covered by a major artist.

You really give this the tex-mex feel it was meant to have with that lovely guitar picking. You've done right on this song. Thanks for bringing the song to life!


Write from your heart, not what you think others want to hear.

https://dansullivan2.bandcamp.com

http://www.cdbaby.com/cd/dansullivan2
Joined: Feb 2011
Posts: 442
D
dmk Offline OP
Serious Contributor
OP Offline
Serious Contributor
D
Joined: Feb 2011
Posts: 442
hi dan,i'm so glad you like it, thanks for writing it and allowing me to cover/adapt it. it was a real pleasure .

cheers, dmk

Joined: Jun 2011
Posts: 487
Z
Top 500 Poster
Offline
Top 500 Poster
Z
Joined: Jun 2011
Posts: 487
Your voice really fits the tune. I'm hearing a few hiccups at the beginning instrumental part---timing issues--minor but noticeable to this guitarist's ears.

Nice work man.

Zeek

Joined: Feb 2011
Posts: 442
D
dmk Offline OP
Serious Contributor
OP Offline
Serious Contributor
D
Joined: Feb 2011
Posts: 442
hi zeek, how perceptive of you, lol, and you are correct. rather than re-record a bunch of stuff i opted to use my sliders in a, a-hum, creative way wink . when they aproach me with that big record deal i'll get right on my tascam 8-trk and fix it lol. thanx for checking this out. your input is appreciated.

cheers,dmk

Last edited by dmk; 06/16/11 06:33 PM.
Joined: Jul 2005
Posts: 12,082
Likes: 1
Top 10 Poster
Offline
Top 10 Poster
Joined: Jul 2005
Posts: 12,082
Likes: 1
You did a nice job on that, Dave. I agree with Dan - the guitar part is beautifully arranged. I liked the instrumental section too. Nice work!

Scott

Joined: Feb 2011
Posts: 442
D
dmk Offline OP
Serious Contributor
OP Offline
Serious Contributor
D
Joined: Feb 2011
Posts: 442
hi scott, thanx for checking out this song, i really appreciate your comments.

dmk

Joined: Apr 2002
Posts: 19,858
Likes: 1
Top 10 Poster
Offline
Top 10 Poster
Joined: Apr 2002
Posts: 19,858
Likes: 1
Hi guys,

! VERY PLEASANTLY DONE !

Thanks for sharing your talents with us.

Good song overall.

Calvin


http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/calvinstewart

Joined: Sep 2009
Posts: 9,003
Likes: 1
Top 20 Poster
Offline
Top 20 Poster
Joined: Sep 2009
Posts: 9,003
Likes: 1
DMK and DAN--

TIS A KILLER to my old ears--I LOVE IT--

WRITE AND PLAY ON--

Mackie

Joined: Mar 2008
Posts: 1,313
T
Top 200 Poster
Offline
Top 200 Poster
T
Joined: Mar 2008
Posts: 1,313
Very nice acoustic melody. Guitars blended beautifully. Enjoyed!

Tom W.

Joined: Mar 2008
Posts: 499
Serious Contributor
Offline
Serious Contributor
Joined: Mar 2008
Posts: 499
Nice job with this song dmk, I really enjoyed the listen.


Scott Steven Walters

Goodfolks link below
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default.cfm?bandID=817195
Joined: Feb 2011
Posts: 442
D
dmk Offline OP
Serious Contributor
OP Offline
Serious Contributor
D
Joined: Feb 2011
Posts: 442
hi gentlemen, calvin, mackie, tom, goodfolks. thanx so much for taking time too check out my cover of dan's song and give your thumbs up, it is appreciated.

dmk

Joined: Jul 2008
Posts: 8,688
Likes: 1
Top 20 Poster
Offline
Top 20 Poster
Joined: Jul 2008
Posts: 8,688
Likes: 1
Dan and David,

What a wonderful song you too have here, enjoyed it very, very much...love the demo you did David...great job...

glyn

Joined: Feb 2011
Posts: 442
D
dmk Offline OP
Serious Contributor
OP Offline
Serious Contributor
D
Joined: Feb 2011
Posts: 442
hi, glynda, thanx for stopping by and your comments are always appreciated, thanx.

dmk

Joined: Jul 2010
Posts: 3,710
Top 100 Poster
Offline
Top 100 Poster
Joined: Jul 2010
Posts: 3,710
Dave, You did such a beautiful job on this song I'm giving your version to my Aunt Betty as her song. Thanks again for recording this one.


Write from your heart, not what you think others want to hear.

https://dansullivan2.bandcamp.com

http://www.cdbaby.com/cd/dansullivan2
Joined: Feb 2011
Posts: 442
D
dmk Offline OP
Serious Contributor
OP Offline
Serious Contributor
D
Joined: Feb 2011
Posts: 442
hi dan, cool! say hi to her for me.

cheers, dmk

Joined: Jan 2011
Posts: 690
R
Top 500 Poster
Offline
Top 500 Poster
R
Joined: Jan 2011
Posts: 690
Great job on this song. Very good lyrically and the music fits perfectly to the words sung.

Definitely a keeper!

Ricky

Joined: Feb 2011
Posts: 442
D
dmk Offline OP
Serious Contributor
OP Offline
Serious Contributor
D
Joined: Feb 2011
Posts: 442
hi ricky, thanx for your thumbs up, that's what i thot when i heard this song too, dan wrote a gem imo.

cheers,dmk

Joined: Aug 2010
Posts: 4,237
Likes: 16
Top 100 Poster
Offline
Top 100 Poster
Joined: Aug 2010
Posts: 4,237
Likes: 16
What a tender and yet hard look at the side of immigration and poverty that no one wnts to see, yrt we all chasde dreams and somrtimes they can cost us our lives. excellent write dmk
~~~MFB III

Joined: Feb 2007
Posts: 10,943
Likes: 3
Top 10 Poster
Offline
Top 10 Poster
Joined: Feb 2007
Posts: 10,943
Likes: 3
This is a nice arrangement -- the guitars and vocals sound pretty good to me. .. and Dan always writes great lyrics. The drum part is a little "different" -- I would rethink that.

Good stuff. I think I remember Dan's version, too (if there was one -- ha, ha).

Kevin


"Good science comes in peer reviewed journals. Conspiracy theories come in YouTube videos. "
Kevin @ bandcamp: Crows Say Vee-Eh
Joined: Jun 2011
Posts: 945
Serious Contributor
Offline
Serious Contributor
Joined: Jun 2011
Posts: 945
This is REALLY Beautiful!!! Nice job!! The lyrics are so touching, and the music and vocals are perfect for it! David, you have such a nice sound in your voice and your guitar!


The dictionary is the only place where success comes before work.--Mark Twain
Joined: Feb 2011
Posts: 442
D
dmk Offline OP
Serious Contributor
OP Offline
Serious Contributor
D
Joined: Feb 2011
Posts: 442
thanx to all who have commented while i was away.

david


Link Copied to Clipboard
Support Just Plain Folks

We would like to keep the membership in Just Plain Folks FREE! Your donation helps support the many programs we offer including Road Trips and the Music Awards.


Newest Members
LukeMeyers, KimBilbrew, AdamSadowski, NicoleRoss, RichardCarr
21,478 Registered Users
Forum Statistics
Forums118
Topics128,718
Posts1,184,589
Members21,479
Most Online176,437
17 minutes ago
Just Plain Quotes
"Do not endeavor to be the smartest kid in a dumb class. Instead, you are better off being the dumbest kid in the smartest class, where you will be challenged and you will learn. If you aren't growing, you are dying." -Brian Austin Whitney
Today's Birthdays
There are no members with birthdays on this day.
Popular Topics(Views)
Powered by UBB.threads™ PHP Forum Software 7.7.5