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Hi Kim,

Thanks for the inspiration and glad you like what we did. I can't believe you haven't already mined this for all it was worth!

Ricki

Hi Kristi,

Thanks for stopping by and sharing our fun. The harmonica and guitar are courtesy of Kevin, a great addition to our couple of words and melody. Glad you like it.

Ricki

This is a gem and I think it works really well. Top marks for your vocal Ricki - It’s worth doing a really polished version, it could become a cult classic – nice bridge!

Hi Tracy,

Thanks for letting us know you like this. It was a lot of fun.

Ricki

Hi John,

Thanks. We always like to leave 'em with a smile.

Ricki

Hi Nite,

Thanks for listening. Most of that cleverness is due to Beth. She's always up for a challenge. If only I was into that whole performance thing. Musical performance, I mean.

Ricki

Hi Dan,

That's what I like to hear, a man caught off guard and smiling! Glad you enjoyed our fun and thanks for listening.

Ricki

Without question, this is an extremely sexy number. The arrangement is tight.

Wew! got to cool down now

Love it!

Good morning Tom,

You've always struck me as a gentleman, so your insertion was well-received . Glad too we could keep you awake long enough to laugh out loud. That's music to my ears.

Thanks for the visit!

Beth

Hi Kim ....

So NOW you tell us about that little gem? That you can't reach Climax without Getting Off at HorneyTown? Holy smokes...I gotta see pictures of this place.

ANYHOO, so delighted your once off-hand comment has morphed into this fun-loving naughty little tune. I'm sure I'm not alone when I say thank you for the inspiration!!

Cheers,
Beth

Hiya Kristi...

Having written with both Ricki and me before, YOU at least know not to believe all this "BETH is the naughty one" malarkey Ricki has been spouting ! She is a dear though, too, so I just try to take a few moments from my needlepoint and charity work to keep her on the straight and narrow...

That aside (LOL!), so glad you enjoyed this. Kevin really added some neat embellishments...and it's a kick to see what a kernel of an idea can turn into.

Thanks for the visit!

Beth the Blasphemed

Hey Tracy,

Coming from you, that means a lot. Though as yet I haven't had a chance to give you an official BRAVO, I've listened to a song or two of yours and am MORE than impressed.

Thank you so much for your kind feedback.

Cheers,
Beth

Hi Larry,

Thanks for coming along for the ride.

Ricki

Hi Pete,

Thanks for listening. I actually thought about your guitar playing while I was struggling with this one. "Where's Pete when I need him?" I think I can speak for Beth and myself when I say we're glad it was as good for you as it was for us!

Ricki

Hi Ben,

Thanks for stopping in. I know what you mean. She's just so bad, she's good, know what I mean, wink, wink, nudge, nudge.

Ricki

Hi Nigel,

Thanks for the great comments. I'm sorry I was so negligent in letting everyone know how helpful your suggestion was for that bridge. It added just the right amount of sass.

On another note, not to get too personal, but looking at your avatar, have you recently put on some weight?

Ricki

Hi Sabrinao,

Thanks for listening and for the cool comments. Nice to meet you and welcome to JPF.

Ricki

Too funny!!! I agree. There are some really crazy names some places. It's even crazier when you find out how many states use the same ones. Anyway, great job!

Hi Jinx,

I just love saying that! Thanks for coming back. Glad you still like it.

Ricki

What a clever write and the vocals are perfection.
The musical arrangement is just stellar.
Watch out Bonnie Raitt...

Great job ladies

Hi there John,

Sorry for the delay in getting back to people on this...Life just keeps getting in the way!

Anyhoo, thanks so much for the visit. As for anything to add, no worries -- didn't you hear a smile is worth a thousand words?

Take care,
Beth

Hey nite,

Boy, "clever" is one of my favorite comments, so thanks for that. Ricki and I were true partners in crime on this one.

Regarding Ricki playing it live, I'd have to agree it would be cool -- at the very least, it beats the alternative .

Ciao for now,
Beth

Hey there Dan!

Yay, another smile -- we must have done something right here . If we did though, it's Ricki's fault ....

Naturally, I'm with you -- she rocks. Though in this case, she sneakily blued .

Thanks so much for the generous and fun-filled feedback .

Cheers,
Beth

Ricki and Beth....very cool "hook" and some great writing skills here....Ricki put a great Blues vocal to it.....this is a classic Blues sound....neat job....Bob

Hey there Larry,

Sorry for the delay in responding to you and the rest of the gang here....

Anyway, thanks so much for taking the ride with us. Glad you enjoyed it -- though I sure hope you were wearing your seatbelt ...

Cheers,
Beth

Oh my goodness Pete, you are certainly full of good ideas! It's nice to see a song trigger such fun tangents.

Thanks so much for your input and suggestions ...

Take care,
Beth

Hi there Ben,

Well it appears the cat is out of the bag. I thought for sure you guys were buying the demure wallflower act...

As for Ricki, she IS the epitome of shy; I'm just grateful she starts drinking so early in the day...

Those character analyses aside, thanks for your visit Ben. Glad you enjoyed it...

ciao for now,
Beth

Hi there Nige,

Aren't you sweet to say such nice things. I've always wanted to be part of a cult classic...and I'm so grateful it's something legal.

As for a "polished version", there's a rumor that Tammy is going to give it a shot (though I still love what Ricki did with it ).

Thanks too for your assistance on the bridge...and combined with Kevin's musical enhancements, this has really been a group effort.

Appreciate your input as always Nigel.

Take care,
Beth

Hi there sabrinao,

It's always a little awkward to meet under such naughty circumstances ...but you smoothed everything out by being so sweet.

Happy to hear you were able to read between the lines ...

Thanks a bunch,
Beth

Hi Jinx,

Thanks for stopping by again. I've been slack on the FIRST round of feedback, so I appreciate your patience.

Beth

Hi Nelson,

Ah, one of my favorite people. I'm so glad you got a chance to take a listen to this and give us your thoughts on it. Coming from you, your generous feedback means a LOT.

Thanks again,
Beth

OMG Bob,

I think I'm actually caught up now!!

Thank you so much for giving us a listen. We had a lot of fun playing around with the lyrics...and Ricki surely sold it with her bluesy vocal. We were pretty pumped to hear Kevin's additions, and we're looking forward to hearing what Tammy does with it too.

So I guess over and above "THANKS", a big "STAY TUNED" is in order...

Until then, take care,
Beth

Just gotta bump this one back up to the top of the board, so as to see some more great responses. off we go~~~MFB III

And a good bump too....

I remember this one, very clever. It deseves some more musical work to finish it, even to demo stage. The uniqueness is priceless.

cheers, niteshift

The trouble with this song is that some women pretend they have heard it just to keep their partners happy

Boy MFB, what a fun stroll down memory lane! Thanks so much for bumping this, we sure had a lot of fun putting it together! That Ricki sure has a voice huh?

Cheers,
Beth

Thanks for the kind comments nite. I know Ricki's pretty busy with some other projects, but I'm sure she'd be delighted to see this one back on the table.

Take it easy!
Beth

Hey there Nigel,

Long time no see . Glad the resurgence of this one gave you a forum for being your rascally self ....

Hope Life is treating you well across the Pond...

Beth