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RY X
by Gary E. Andrews - 09/21/26 04:03 PM
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Soft Loft
by Gary E. Andrews - 09/21/26 11:52 AM
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8Graves
by Gary E. Andrews - 09/20/26 06:05 PM
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Saosin
by Gary E. Andrews - 09/20/26 02:43 PM
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BRAVE LITTLE FLYER
Mother takes me to JFK And puts me on a plane Dad will wait for me in LA The captain knows my name They call the Brave Little Flyer Cause Im always on the go I can rise above the clouds And leave the turbulence below
This Brave Little Flyer will be lifted up Daddy will swing me around in a ring But flying with one parent in circles Well thats like flying with half a wing
Far below theres a city It looks like Christmas lights Grown ups dont look so pretty On this red eye flight Cruising' at this altitude High above the great divide Im tossed between two parents But I take it all in stride
This Brave Little Flyer has the right stuff Some day Ill be captain of my own air force With someone beside you it aint so tough A good co pilot will stay the course
Stewardess comes to take a look She thinks my ride is pretty rough I glance down to my pocket book And keep my heart good and tough
I used to think that Santa Claus Could make my family whole I even dreamt of flying there Right up to the North Pole Being older now Ive given up On getting them together The skies are always friendly Above the stormy weather.
2000 Stefan des Lauriers)
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Neat lyric as always, Stefan. A bicoastal child of divorce-- now there's an lyric topic I've never seen. And it's well handled too. Why not take lines 5-8 of verse 1 and make that a chorus somehow? The only thing this lyric lacks right now is better structure. And that six-line bridge, if that's what it is, reads a little weird, but that could just be because of where you split your lines.
Nice job here! Lotta good lines.
Anthony
P.S.: What's a "pocket book"? Is that a little paperback he brought with him? Just wondering.
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Thanks Anthony,
Good suggestion about making the chorus out of lines 5-8.
The pocket book is a paperback. I think it's a Canadian term, or something I picked up as a kid.
I made a demo of this song (with words a little differen) in 1995. I shopped it around til a friend said that it would make parents of divorced children feel bad. I was looking from the kids point of view, but it wasn't politically correct to write a song about a child who wanted his parents to get back together. Anyhow in the first version he asks the pilot to take him to the North Pole to see Sanity Clause. Now I don''t know about the song.
I liked the idea of a parent swinging a child like an airplane. With a parent at each arm you can go in a straight line, but with one you go in circles... A friend of mine who had a pilots licence said that both wings are considered one wing... So I'm wondering... Also I don't hink you can leave the turbulance below
Stefan
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