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Rain
by bennash - 12/12/24 07:38 PM
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Curtis
by Gary E. Andrews - 12/12/24 07:05 PM
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Icehouse
by Gary E. Andrews - 12/12/24 06:53 PM
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Janita
by Gary E. Andrews - 12/11/24 08:26 PM
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El Lopo
by Gary E. Andrews - 12/09/24 11:18 AM
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VERSION 1) of song
Hello,
I was born on 9/11 so I felt it was my duty to write a go get’em song for us. I want to get it made and try to get it played on the armed forces radio. The song has no music or any one to sing it. Plus I’m plum broke due to some health issues and can’t afford to have it made. I’m not interested in making any money on it; I’m just looking for some patriots that have what it takes to help me get this made for the boys. Can you help me find some one that can put some music behind it and sing it for the guys? It was written with the young guys in mind as a hip hop or rock/rap song. Here’s the song. I have two versions. It’s about 9/11 and the first year following 9/11. Thank you.
WARNING
Dedicated to the victims of 9/11, Those they left behind And the men & women of the military
KEY CODE:
P – PURPLE – PRESIDENTS SOUND BYTE R – RED – DIRECTION OR SOUND EFFECT B – BLACK – MAIN SINGER G – GREEN – GIANTS VOICE VERSION 1)
BEHOLD THE HAND OF GOD R - ( Song begins ) ( No music ) ( Four giant foot steps coming at you ) ( Faint ) ( Close ) ( Closer ) ( Closest and stops )
G - Stand up
R - ( Air raid sirens start ) R - ( Music begins ) R - ( Air raid sirens fade out )
B - Confess your sins its good for the soul B - If your with me let’s roll
G - This is for the ones who fell G - Let’s send those vultures to hell G - Smok’em out and mak’em run G - Into the sights of my gun G - Let the dogs loose son
B - The smoke and ashes B - Life flashes B - Then the death cloud smashes
G - Dear God G - Save the children as it passes
B – We don’t blink we stare B - They soar like vultures in the air B - The nations are calling they say they care B - But only God can help the hearts they tear
B - No matter the gender B - We don’t retreat or surrender B - Be prepared for how we deal with these offenders
G - Stand up
R - ( Shot gun pump )
G - This is for the ones who fell G - Let’s send those vultures to hell G - Smok’em out and mak’em run G - Into the sights of my gun G - Let the dogs loose son
B - Whistles calling in the steam B - The cross in the beam B - From the ground our blood screams
B - Never forget what you’ve seen
R - ( Bell toll ) ( Soft )
B - There’s no good bye B - So we cry B - Hold our candle’s and believe a lie
G - There’s still a chance they didn’t die
R - ( Bell toll ) ( louder )
B - Our light is in the darkness B - But the darkness shall not over come
G - Stand up
G - It’s a good day to die G - I can hear your momma cry G - Hold the flag high G - An eye for an eye G - Let the tomahawks fly
B - From out of the nation come men forged by fire B - Their mere presence inspires B - But they too are soon reduced to criers B - If you said you wouldn’t be
G - You’re a liar
B - Turn and face the ghostly rubble B - Work your shift then pull a double B - Men of iron don’t quit when there’s trouble
G - In these tears there’s no disgrace G - Stand tall when their children see your face
B - Long live the God we know B - From him the milk and honey flow B - When the winds of war blow B - He bends his bow B - And lays the devil low
B - Vultures practice what they preach B - Don’t you dare turn the other cheek
R - ( Presidents sound byte ) P - Make no mistake P - The United States will hunt down and punish P - Those responsible for these cowardly acts
G - Dive – Dive – Dive G - Stand up G - Get up G - Get out of that ditch
G - This is for the ones who fell G - Let’s send those vultures to hell G - Smok’em out and mak’em run G - Into the sights of my gun G - Let the dogs loose son
B - Death is not pretend B - The Marines will grin B - As they descend B - The days of your terror end B - Tell’em again
G - Stand up
G - It’s a good day to die G - I can hear your momma cry G - Hold the flag high G - An eye for an eye G - Let the tomahawks fly
B - From out of a clear sky B - The terrifying sound B - They destroy your towns B - Then the jets pound B - They leave frowns R - ( Giants foot step - faint ) B - Unhappy clowns R - ( Giants foot step - close ) B - Boots hit the ground R - ( Giants foot step - closer ) B - We’re behind you turn around R - ( Giants foot step - closest )
G - DANGER – DANGER G - Airborne Rangers
G - FE – FI – FO – FUM G - Did you think we wouldn’t come?
R - ( Shot gun blast )
G - Dumb
B - Behold the hand of God
G – JDAM - Stand back
R - ( In coming JDAM ) ( Bomb explodes )
G - Whoa G - Look for the clue G - Exodus 23:22 G - He fore told you
R - ( Sound of a jet coming in and flying over )
B - From the boys in the blue B - They signed it too B - Let every man be a liar and God be true
G - You vultures know what to do G - Save the last bullet you’re through
G - Men are closing in G - We’re coming for you
R - ( Shot gun pump )
G - This is for the ones who fell G - Let’s send those vultures to hell G - Smok’em out and mak’em run G - Into the sights of my gun
R - ( Shot gun blast ) ( Music stops )
R - ( Shot gun pump )
Copy write 2007 Written by Bill Wagner Buckshotdad1960@yahoo.com
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Buckshot, very moving tribute. I got a real visual feeling while i read it. Here is a computer tip for you, to get that little © emblem for copyright, press and hold ALT, then type numbers 0169. Works on most PC's.
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Hi There,
A very nice gesture, however I think it's very complicated,what you have here, You have some great sentiment, but I think it's too late in the day , I believe we have had some revenge, The Afghanistan war is still going on, I truly believe Bin Laden is Dead, but then there are all these other little groups, and this has been going on since the begining of man.
I would say let it go maybe expressing your self as you have has helped you.
SPLIT LEVEL
Have been working at E.M.I. Hayes U.K. in many departments starting as Tea Boy and worked through to A and R, New Artist Management, Co Writing , with Boy Bands, and some solo acts I have always played in bands,
SPLIT LEVEL psuedonymn of course to many thieves and robbers on the web these days
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