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VERSION 1) of song

Hello,

I was born on 9/11 so I felt it was my duty to write a go getem song for us. I want to get it made and try to get it played on the armed forces radio. The song has no music or any one to sing it. Plus Im plum broke due to some health issues and cant afford to have it made. Im not interested in making any money on it; Im just looking for some patriots that have what it takes to help me get this made for the boys. Can you help me find some one that can put some music behind it and sing it for the guys? It was written with the young guys in mind as a hip hop or rock/rap song. Heres the song. I have two versions. Its about 9/11 and the first year following 9/11. Thank you.


WARNING

Dedicated to the victims of 9/11,
Those they left behind
And the men & women of the military


KEY CODE:

P PURPLE PRESIDENTS SOUND BYTE
R RED DIRECTION OR SOUND EFFECT
B BLACK MAIN SINGER
G GREEN GIANTS VOICE
VERSION 1)

BEHOLD THE HAND OF GOD
R - ( Song begins ) ( No music )
( Four giant foot steps coming at you )
( Faint )
( Close )
( Closer )
( Closest and stops )

G - Stand up

R - ( Air raid sirens start )
R - ( Music begins )
R - ( Air raid sirens fade out )

B - Confess your sins its good for the soul
B - If your with me lets roll

G - This is for the ones who fell
G - Lets send those vultures to hell
G - Smokem out and makem run
G - Into the sights of my gun
G - Let the dogs loose son

B - The smoke and ashes
B - Life flashes
B - Then the death cloud smashes

G - Dear God
G - Save the children as it passes

B We dont blink we stare
B - They soar like vultures in the air
B - The nations are calling they say they care
B - But only God can help the hearts they tear

B - No matter the gender
B - We dont retreat or surrender
B - Be prepared for how we deal with these offenders

G - Stand up

R - ( Shot gun pump )

G - This is for the ones who fell
G - Lets send those vultures to hell
G - Smokem out and makem run
G - Into the sights of my gun
G - Let the dogs loose son

B - Whistles calling in the steam
B - The cross in the beam
B - From the ground our blood screams

B - Never forget what youve seen

R - ( Bell toll ) ( Soft )

B - Theres no good bye
B - So we cry
B - Hold our candles and believe a lie

G - Theres still a chance they didnt die

R - ( Bell toll ) ( louder )

B - Our light is in the darkness
B - But the darkness shall not over come

G - Stand up

G - Its a good day to die
G - I can hear your momma cry
G - Hold the flag high
G - An eye for an eye
G - Let the tomahawks fly

B - From out of the nation come men forged by fire
B - Their mere presence inspires
B - But they too are soon reduced to criers
B - If you said you wouldnt be

G - Youre a liar

B - Turn and face the ghostly rubble
B - Work your shift then pull a double
B - Men of iron dont quit when theres trouble

G - In these tears theres no disgrace
G - Stand tall when their children see your face

B - Long live the God we know
B - From him the milk and honey flow
B - When the winds of war blow
B - He bends his bow
B - And lays the devil low

B - Vultures practice what they preach
B - Dont you dare turn the other cheek

R - ( Presidents sound byte )
P - Make no mistake
P - The United States will hunt down and punish
P - Those responsible for these cowardly acts

G - Dive Dive Dive
G - Stand up
G - Get up
G - Get out of that ditch

G - This is for the ones who fell
G - Lets send those vultures to hell
G - Smokem out and makem run
G - Into the sights of my gun
G - Let the dogs loose son

B - Death is not pretend
B - The Marines will grin
B - As they descend
B - The days of your terror end
B - Tellem again

G - Stand up

G - Its a good day to die
G - I can hear your momma cry
G - Hold the flag high
G - An eye for an eye
G - Let the tomahawks fly

B - From out of a clear sky
B - The terrifying sound
B - They destroy your towns
B - Then the jets pound
B - They leave frowns
R - ( Giants foot step - faint )
B - Unhappy clowns
R - ( Giants foot step - close )
B - Boots hit the ground
R - ( Giants foot step - closer )
B - Were behind you turn around
R - ( Giants foot step - closest )

G - DANGER DANGER
G - Airborne Rangers

G - FE FI FO FUM
G - Did you think we wouldnt come?

R - ( Shot gun blast )

G - Dumb

B - Behold the hand of God

G JDAM - Stand back

R - ( In coming JDAM ) ( Bomb explodes )

G - Whoa
G - Look for the clue
G - Exodus 23:22
G - He fore told you

R - ( Sound of a jet coming in and flying over )

B - From the boys in the blue
B - They signed it too
B - Let every man be a liar and God be true

G - You vultures know what to do
G - Save the last bullet youre through

G - Men are closing in
G - Were coming for you

R - ( Shot gun pump )

G - This is for the ones who fell
G - Lets send those vultures to hell
G - Smokem out and makem run
G - Into the sights of my gun

R - ( Shot gun blast ) ( Music stops )

R - ( Shot gun pump )



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Buckshot, very moving tribute. I got a real visual feeling while i read it. Here is a computer tip for you, to get that little emblem for copyright, press and hold ALT, then type numbers 0169. Works on most PC's.

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Hi There,

A very nice gesture, however I think it's very complicated,what you have here, You have some great sentiment, but I think it's too late in the day , I believe we have had some revenge,
The Afghanistan war is still going on, I truly believe Bin Laden is Dead, but then there are all these other little groups, and this has been going on since the begining of man.

I would say let it go maybe expressing your self as you have has helped you.

SPLIT LEVEL


Have been working at E.M.I. Hayes U.K. in many departments starting as Tea Boy and worked through to A and R, New Artist Management,
Co Writing , with Boy Bands, and some solo acts
I have always played in bands,

SPLIT LEVEL
psuedonymn of course to many thieves and robbers on the web these days

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