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For Dom
by JAPOV - 04/30/26 09:52 PM
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by JAPOV - 04/27/26 10:49 AM
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WHEN?
by JAPOV - 04/23/26 11:28 PM
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Joined: Sep 2004
Posts: 242
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This one was for fun.
Just Toss Another Down
As I sit here on this barstool
I can't help but feel depressed
Lately you've been comin' home
With Old Spice on your dress
I know that work don't last that long
And neither does the shopping
So I've found a way to fix it all-
I've decided to go bar-hopping!
'Cause a little bit of beer
Is my excuse for all the tears
It hurts me to know I've lost
The one I hold so dear
I know that I'll be sorry
When it comes the crack of dawn
But right now my emotions say
Just toss another down
How come lately when I'm with you
You're off in outer-space?
Do you HAVE to run those errands
With all that make-up on your face?
I'm tired of frozen dinners
And the house is a danger-zone
Bartender, pop one open
I'm spendin' tonight alone
'Cause a little bit of beer
Is my excuse for all the tears
It hurts me to know I've lost
The one I hold so dear
I know that I'll be sorry
When it comes the crack of dawn
But right now my emotions say
Just toss another down
Someone calls the house and hangs up
They don't even say hello
And, hey, while it's on my mind
Where DO the phone bills go?
I married you for good or bad
And right now it's pretty crappy
I wonder why the P.T.A.
Sends you home just so darn happy?
But a little bit of beer
Has chased away all my fears
If you want him, then go get him-
You'll see no sorrow here!
There's plenty more where you came from
I'll find one that ain't phony
I hope you're happy with your man
Just don't expect alimony!
By Keye Kirkland
Copyright 2003 all rights reserved
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HiDee Double-K!
It's actually not a bad Tearjerker, 'til ya toss in the Alimony-Verse. IMO.
IS Fun, as-Penned...
My initial reaction was "WHY is this guy giving UP so EASILY?"
But...he's OK as a Loser...BUT then ya Twist him around & he's all over her now--
DOES work pretty well as Parody..YET you Could make it into somethin' Serious..& Commercial..with a medium bit of Rewriting.
Good Luck with it, Amigo!
Big Guy-Hug,
Stan
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