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Rain
by bennash - 12/12/24 07:38 PM
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Curtis
by Gary E. Andrews - 12/12/24 07:05 PM
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Icehouse
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El Lopo
by Gary E. Andrews - 12/09/24 11:18 AM
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"A Country Boy Can Survive" called and they said that Hank wants his melody back. 
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Ha yeah well I thought it sounded like Taylor Dane or Melissa Etheridge
If this stuff is stolen it's going to make it all worthless
The lyric you write would have to alter the melody somewhat.
But I may not be using this anymore
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What does "I surfender" (at the end of the song) mean? Was that possibly a typo that got sung by your AI generator?
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I believe it's a variation. It's simulating improvising.
Which is often done at end of tracks.
It's just shortening the phrase for variation and effect.
What does I surrender mean,?
"I surrender" means to give up completely or agree to forgo something, especially in favor of another person. For example, "I surrender myself to the police".
Book it.
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You believe it's a variation? Didn't you write the lyrics? "I surfender" is in your lyrics and that's what the vocalist sings. I know what I surrender means. If you wrote that on purpose why do you believe it's a variation?
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You believe it's a variation? Didn't you write the lyrics? "I surfender" is in your lyrics and that's what the vocalist sings. I know what I surrender means. If you wrote that on purpose why do you believe it's a variation? You asked me what I surrender means, because you said the singer sang it at the end. Did I write those two extra I surrender st the end,? No I didn't , but I wrote it 6 times during the song As an outro I guess it recycled it for two more times What your driving at I have no clue
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Fdem,
this is a waste of time man. I asked you what "I surfender" meant, not "I surrender". READ MY POST! The spelling is important! Your last lyric line goes "I surfender" (not I surrender - look at what you posted above) and that is exactly what the vocalist sings at the end of the song. When I listened I thought ... what's this guy singing ... I surfender? I assume it's a typo because your posts are full of typos. Funny that AI doesn't fix that. I advise to consistently use either I surrender or I surfender throughout the whole song and not mixing them. But hey, it's your song.
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Fdem,
this is a waste of time man. I asked you what "I surfender" meant, not "I surrender". READ MY POST! The spelling is important! Your last lyric line goes "I surfender" (not I surrender - look at what you posted above) and that is exactly what the vocalist sings at the end of the song. When I listened I thought ... what's this guy singing ... I surfender? I assume it's a typo because your posts are full of typos. Funny that AI doesn't fix that. I advise to consistently use either I surrender or I surfender throughout the whole song and not mixing them. But hey, it's your song. I didn't notice that a actually. Apologies No it won't fix typos. It will think you created this word. ..lol
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And "ender" is a type of ocean wave. (I'm, pretty sure I saw that on tiktok somewhere) This song is about surfing enders. "I surf enders." It should have been plural with a space in the middle. 
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Apologies accepted. It looks like I listened to your demo and read your lyrics more closely than you did.
Peace.
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