8 members (Gary E. Andrews, Sunset Poet, rpirone, Fdemetrio, bennash, couchgrouch, Gavin Sinclair, 1 invisible),
891
guests, and
287
robots. |
Key:
Admin,
Global Mod,
Mod
|
|
Welcome to the Just Plain Folks forums! You are currently viewing our forums as a Guest which gives you limited access to most of our discussions and to other features.
By joining our free community you will have access to post and respond to topics, communicate privately with our users (PM), respond to polls, upload content, and access many other features. Registration is fast, simple, and absolutely free; so please join our community today!
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Leafs
by Gary E. Andrews - 05/01/24 01:05 PM
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
.
by Fdemetrio - 04/25/24 01:36 AM
|
|
|
Joined: Jan 2005
Posts: 13,325
Top 10 Poster
|
OP
Top 10 Poster
Joined: Jan 2005
Posts: 13,325 |
Squeezed one in before the weekend is up.Thanx ya'll,Mike http://soundcloud.com/mojo-mike/go-girlGo Girl go girl,you're makin' me blue go girl,ya broke my heart in two go girl,to tell ya the truth i'd be better off without the likes of you go girl,quit ya hangin' around go girl,ya know ya bringin' me down go girl,look how ya makin' me frown i'd be better off if you'd leave town there aint no sense in makin' up tomorrow mornin' we'd be breakin' up ya keep messin' 'round treatin' me like a fool i just can't take a love so cruel go girl,and dontcha look back go girl,i think you'd better make tracks go girl,as a matter of fact let's not waste time i'll help you pack [chorus]
|
|
|
|
Joined: Sep 2003
Posts: 4,199
Top 100 Poster
|
Top 100 Poster
Joined: Sep 2003
Posts: 4,199 |
Good one, Mike. I like how you used the hook
Bill
|
|
|
|
Joined: Jan 2005
Posts: 13,325
Top 10 Poster
|
OP
Top 10 Poster
Joined: Jan 2005
Posts: 13,325 |
much appreciated for the visit Bill.Mike
|
|
|
|
Joined: Nov 2008
Posts: 5,210
Top 50 Poster
|
Top 50 Poster
Joined: Nov 2008
Posts: 5,210 |
Squeezed one in before the weekend is up.Thanx ya'll,Mike http://soundcloud.com/mojo-mike/go-girlGo Girl go girl,you're makin' me blue go girl,ya broke my heart in two go girl,to tell ya the truth i'd be better off without the likes of you ** I felt the break here was not needed..I prefer it to keep going, just my take on it. go girl,quit ya hangin' around go girl,ya know ya bringin' me down go girl,look how ya makin' me frown i'd be better off if you'd leave town there aint no sense in makin' up tomorrow mornin' we'd be breakin' up ya keep messin' 'round treatin' me like a fool i just can't take a love so cruel- -maybe go up on CRUEL here if you plan to keep the break in music for it to stand out a little more..:)go girl,and dontcha look back go girl,i think you'd better make tracks go girl,as a matter of fact let's not waste time i'll help you pack [chorus] Great use of hook and catchy...nice job Michael!!! Kimberly
*Always open to collaborations on my lyrics.. with singers and musicians, but PLEASE contact me before putting work into one--in case someone else has it..thanks!!** BMI Member All Rights Reserved http://www.littleikepublishing.com Email for Song Business Only littleikeproductions@hotmail.com
|
|
|
|
Joined: Jan 2006
Posts: 8,490
Top 20 Poster
|
Top 20 Poster
Joined: Jan 2006
Posts: 8,490 |
Hi Mike,
This sounds really nice! Cool little song! Lisa
|
|
|
|
Joined: Jul 2013
Posts: 1,985
Top 200 Poster
|
Top 200 Poster
Joined: Jul 2013
Posts: 1,985 |
You tell 'er, Mike!
"There aint no sense in makin' up Tomorrow mornin' we'd be breakin' up"
cool lines.
"let's not waste time i'll help you pack"
I know it's a break-up song... but you cracked me up there...
floyd
|
|
|
|
Joined: Sep 2009
Posts: 9,003 Likes: 1
Top 20 Poster
|
Top 20 Poster
Joined: Sep 2009
Posts: 9,003 Likes: 1 |
Michael--
COOL SONG MIKE--good luck!
Mackie
|
|
|
|
Joined: Jan 2005
Posts: 13,325
Top 10 Poster
|
OP
Top 10 Poster
Joined: Jan 2005
Posts: 13,325 |
hey Kim,thanx for stoppin' by!I wasn't sure about the break but i knew it was going to be short song anyway so i was goin' to extend it that way.Thanx,Mike
|
|
|
|
Joined: Jan 2005
Posts: 13,325
Top 10 Poster
|
OP
Top 10 Poster
Joined: Jan 2005
Posts: 13,325 |
|
|
|
|
Joined: Jan 2005
Posts: 13,325
Top 10 Poster
|
OP
Top 10 Poster
Joined: Jan 2005
Posts: 13,325 |
yeah,some of them can't take a hint Floyd so ya gotta tell 'em somehow.Thanx a bunch!Mike
|
|
|
|
Joined: Dec 2012
Posts: 251
Top 500 Poster
|
Top 500 Poster
Joined: Dec 2012
Posts: 251 |
Nuttin' wrong with that one. With the groove you got there, you could almost throw in a bridge puttin you on a sandy beach sippin umbrella drinks or something....
Nice one.
|
|
|
We would like to keep the membership in Just Plain Folks FREE! Your donation helps support the many programs we offer including Road Trips and the Music Awards.
|
|
Forums117
Topics125,799
Posts1,161,676
Members21,470
|
Most Online37,523 Jan 25th, 2020
|
|
"Sometimes, the best thing you can say, isn't the easiest thing" -Brian Austin Whitney
|
|
|
|