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#1039820 - 02/16/14 05:43 PM Go Girl  
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Squeezed one in before the weekend is up.Thanx ya'll,Mike

http://soundcloud.com/mojo-mike/go-girl

Go Girl

go girl,you're makin' me blue
go girl,ya broke my heart in two
go girl,to tell ya the truth
i'd be better off without the likes of you

go girl,quit ya hangin' around
go girl,ya know ya bringin' me down
go girl,look how ya makin' me frown
i'd be better off if you'd leave town

there aint no sense in makin' up
tomorrow mornin' we'd be breakin' up
ya keep messin' 'round treatin' me like a fool
i just can't take a love so cruel

go girl,and dontcha look back
go girl,i think you'd better make tracks
go girl,as a matter of fact
let's not waste time i'll help you pack

[chorus]

#1039829 - 02/16/14 08:12 PM Re: Go Girl [Re: Michael LeBlanc]  
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Good one, Mike. I like how you used the hook

Bill


#1039851 - 02/17/14 10:55 AM Re: Go Girl [Re: Bill Osofsky]  
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much appreciated for the visit Bill.Mike

#1039875 - 02/17/14 04:43 PM Re: Go Girl [Re: Michael LeBlanc]  
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Originally Posted by Michael LeBlanc
Squeezed one in before the weekend is up.Thanx ya'll,Mike

http://soundcloud.com/mojo-mike/go-girl

Go Girl

go girl,you're makin' me blue
go girl,ya broke my heart in two
go girl,to tell ya the truth
i'd be better off without the likes of you
** I felt the break here was not needed..I prefer it to keep going, just my take on it. wink
go girl,quit ya hangin' around
go girl,ya know ya bringin' me down
go girl,look how ya makin' me frown
i'd be better off if you'd leave town

there aint no sense in makin' up
tomorrow mornin' we'd be breakin' up
ya keep messin' 'round treatin' me like a fool
i just can't take a love so cruel--maybe go up on CRUEL here if you plan to keep the break in music for it to stand out a little more..:)

go girl,and dontcha look back
go girl,i think you'd better make tracks
go girl,as a matter of fact
let's not waste time i'll help you pack

[chorus]

Great use of hook and catchy...nice job Michael!!!
Kimberly


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#1039890 - 02/17/14 09:26 PM Re: Go Girl [Re: KimberlyinNC]  
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Hi Mike,

This sounds really nice! Cool little song!
Lisa

#1039899 - 02/17/14 10:08 PM Re: Go Girl [Re: Lisa Gundling]  
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You tell 'er, Mike!

"There aint no sense in makin' up
Tomorrow mornin' we'd be breakin' up"

cool lines.

"let's not waste time i'll help you pack"

I know it's a break-up song... but you cracked me up there...

floyd

#1039907 - 02/17/14 10:26 PM Re: Go Girl [Re: Michael LeBlanc]  
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Michael--

COOL SONG MIKE--good luck!

Mackie

#1039930 - 02/18/14 12:42 AM Re: Go Girl [Re: Mackie H.]  
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hey Kim,thanx for stoppin' by!I wasn't sure about the break but i knew it was going to be short song anyway so i was goin' to extend it that way.Thanx,Mike

#1039931 - 02/18/14 12:42 AM Re: Go Girl [Re: Michael LeBlanc]  
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thank ya Lisa!Mike

#1039932 - 02/18/14 12:44 AM Re: Go Girl [Re: Michael LeBlanc]  
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yeah,some of them can't take a hint Floyd so ya gotta tell 'em somehow.Thanx a bunch!Mike

#1039941 - 02/18/14 01:23 AM Re: Go Girl [Re: Michael LeBlanc]  
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Nuttin' wrong with that one. With the groove you got there, you could almost throw in a bridge puttin you on a sandy beach sippin umbrella drinks or something....

Nice one.


Fred Choate
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