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Riot Fest
by Gary E. Andrews - 06/21/26 10:51 PM
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Hard-Fi
by Gary E. Andrews - 06/19/26 06:43 PM
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Howdy Mike
Its a fun tune, and I needed to learn how to use this recording software, like I said in the email wasnt trying to step on your creative toes.
After looking at your projected structure for the tune, Im wondering if a bridge rather than a verse wouldnt work better... Just a Thought.
Cheers
Paul Paul, I presume you mean after where the projected solo would be: V1/V2/Ch/V3/V4/CH/Solo/ V1/CH/Ch & end on "box"... It's worth thinking about...but begs the question, what else could the singer talk about, there? Whereas a return to V1 there is the singer, having told the whole tale of his radio and how it finally broke, decides to go back to the beginning of the memory, and focus on that happier part of the story... Technically a bridge would be what's called for there, in most country tunes...but I'm not sure that it would work in this one...I'll give it some more thought, though! Mike
Fate doesn't hang on a wrong or right choice
Fortune depends on the tone of your voice
-The Divine Comedy (Neil Hannon)
from the song "Songs of Love"
from the album "Casanova" (1996)
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