Originally Posted by Dottie
Hi Michael,

This is a very cool traditional country song. I noticed you didn't sing the last verse and I agree you don't need it but if you wanted to you could change the structure a little and make a cool bridge out of it. I love this line;

Oh momma momma you don't understand

I can feel so much emotion in that line.

Anyway I think you have a very cool song. smile

Dottie


Thanks Dottie, I'm good with "momma dialogue" haha...I still have mine, though barely...she lays ten feet away, in a hospital bed...as I take care of her, as she approaches her final days...she still sees me in a somewhat different way than I see myself...and that's a good thing...feeling like a "momma" has kept her going, me thinks... smile

Thank again,

Mike

Fate doesn't hang on a wrong or right choice
Fortune depends on the tone of your voice

-The Divine Comedy (Neil Hannon)
from the song "Songs of Love"
from the album "Casanova" (1996)