TRAVIS--

I RAN AWAY FROM THE ORPHANAGE TWICE--THE PUNISHMENT WAS WORSE THAN THE DREAM--I WAS RUNNING AWAY WITH NO PLACE TO RUN--LOTS OF THOUGHTS IN THIS ONE--SOME I HAD!

I LIKE THE GENERAL STORY, BUT NOT THE ENDING--I THINK IT SHOULD TURN OUT POSITIVE--ELECTRICITY FLOWS FROM NEGATIVE TO POSITIVE--EVEN WITH A SHOCK!

KEEP ON WRITING--

Mackie