Lonely in heaven. Rewrite 5

Re: I'd find it lonely in heaven. Rewrite 4 Travis david #954333 04/11/12 02:57 PM
Joined: Jul 2010 Posts: 29,275 Tampa, Florida since 1973 " "Tampa Stan" Good (D) Top 10 Poster
"Tampa Stan" Good (D) Top 10 Poster " Joined: Jul 2010 Posts: 29,275 Tampa, Florida since 1973	HiDee Bro-Trav'... "It'd be too-lonely in Heaven/ When all my friends are waitin' in Hell/ Devil's owned my soul since the day I was born/ Now it's Payback-Time, I can tell" KOS on that Chorus Sug... I'll also sug Pruning every Removable-Word in your Verses, so it's smoother-to-sing. Vl f'rinstance: Found as a baby, neath a tree/ Note from Mama, pinned-to-me/ Said "Please take him, or the devil could/ 'Cause his daddy took me, when I was up to no-good" KOS...again...&..Good Luck with this Tough-as-Nails Life-Story, Amigo! Best Wishes & a Big Guy-Hug, Stan

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Lonely in heaven. Rewrite 5	Travis david	04/07/12 05:21 PM
Re: It'll be lonely in heaven( if St. Peter takes me in)	Douglas Murphy	04/07/12 05:37 PM
Re: It'll be lonely in heaven( if St. Peter takes me in)	Travis david	04/07/12 05:50 PM
Re: It'll be lonely in heaven( if St. Peter takes me in)	Douglas Murphy	04/07/12 05:56 PM
Re: It'll be lonely in heaven( if St. Peter takes me in)	Travis david	04/07/12 06:43 PM
Re: It'll be lonely in heaven( if St. Peter takes me in)	Michael LeBlanc	04/07/12 07:33 PM
Re: It'll be lonely in heaven( if St. Peter takes me in)	Travis david	04/07/12 07:59 PM
Re: It'll be lonely in heaven( if St. Peter takes me in)	R. Shayne Vaughan	04/07/12 10:33 PM
Re: It'll be lonely in heaven. Rewrite	Travis david	04/08/12 11:03 AM
Re: It'll be lonely in heaven. Rewrite	Travis david	04/08/12 07:45 PM
Re: It'll be lonely in heaven. Rewrite	Mackie H.	04/08/12 08:27 PM
Re: It'll be lonely in heaven. Rewrite	Travis david	04/08/12 09:03 PM
Re: It'll be lonely in heaven. Rewrite	Lisa Gundling	04/09/12 06:47 PM
Re: It'll be lonely in heaven. Rewrite	RogerS	04/10/12 02:44 AM
Re: It'll be lonely in heaven. Rewrite	Wyman Lloyd (D)	04/10/12 03:04 AM
Re: I'll find it so lonely in heaven. Rewrite	thegroovedepartment	04/10/12 10:22 AM
Re: I'll find it so lonely in heaven. Rewrite	Travis david	04/10/12 06:39 PM
Re: I'll find it so lonely in heaven. Rewrite	Travis david	04/10/12 06:41 PM
Re: I'll find it so lonely in heaven. Rewrite	Lisa Gundling	04/11/12 05:05 AM
Re: I'll find it so lonely in heaven. Rewrite	Travis david	04/11/12 12:01 PM
Re: I'll find it so lonely in heaven. Rewrite	Travis david	04/11/12 12:13 PM
Re: I'll find it so lonely in heaven. Rewrite	Travis david	04/11/12 06:37 PM
Re: I'd find it lonely in heaven. Rewrite 4	"Tampa Stan" Good (D)	04/11/12 06:57 PM
Re: I'd find it lonely in heaven. Rewrite 4	Travis david	04/11/12 07:07 PM
Re: I'd find it lonely in heaven. Rewrite 4	Travis david	04/12/12 12:27 PM

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