Hi Kevin,

First thing I thought was wow I love this music. I don't know anything about mixing but you have a lot going on and it sure does sound good.

I think this part can use a little smoothing out, maybe delete a few words.

If you think you are going to
figure it all out one day
I am here to tell you
that feeling
is elusive and far -- a -- way

That's all I have. I love the way it ends! smile

Dottie