Let's see Kevin. According to the one thread on the general forum about critiques I'm not supposed to pat you on the back. I've got to...ah say I've got to find something wrong to make your song stronger. OK, I've got it...You spelled...nah, that's not it. You spelled everything right. Oh oh, I have it now...No that's not it...

Oh well. I guess I'm not very good at this game, lol. Seriously, you've captured the escense (did I spell that correctly?) of what it's like to write that first song, poem or anything related. I like the tongue in cheek humor. It's kind of a song inside a song. You always make BIAB sound so natural. You're a master at that and the virtual harmony worked out well...no mechanical sound to it.

I'm sorry. I'm just not very good at this critiquing thing. I really had fun listening to this. Dare I say it? (say it...say it) Nice job. I wouldn't change a thing. Give your bad self a pat on the back.

Stevie

I'm the only person here who is not unique.