Hi Kevin,

Sorry, I didn’t hear the first one so I have no comparison. Just listening through my computer speakers it’s sounded fine. So I put on the headphones to get a better listen. First off, you need a pop filter on the mic as I heard a lot of pops ether on your vocals or just hitting the mic. With headphones, the mix sounded very mono. A cool trick to add depth is to copy a track. Pan the first track hard left and the copy hard right. Now move one of the tracks a hair off the other one. This would have thickened up your backing vocals which sounded a little thin. Like I said, it’s a nice trick if you can do it.

Enjoyed the listen