This is my first time posting lyrics on this board. I've been a member for about a month or so and I have posted critiques on a few lyrics of others.
This is a song I wrote a couple of years ago. Please offer feedback and let me know what you think!

Can't Take Away Who I Am

Sitting on the edge of a dream
Reaching out, I'm about to fall
Peaople think it's a crazy thing
To just let go and risk it all
They think they can take it all away from me
They don't understand who I am and who I wanna be

Chorus:
You could take everything from me
And I wouldn't feel a thing
'Cause you can't take away who I am
You could crush all of my dreams
And I wouldn't stop believing
'Cause you can't take away who I am
And nobody can

Walking far my legs are weak
Feel like I might have to crawl
But when I get where I need to be
Wait and see I will stand up tall
People think I'll give up so easily
Just means that they don't know anything about the real me

(chorus)

No, no nobody can(6x)

(Chorus)

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