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Lot Long
by Gary E. Andrews - 11/10/26 11:20 AM
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Joined: Jul 2005
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I'd rather you reach for notes in a chorus that lifts rather than in a chorus that doesn't move the song. Nice chording Scott--lovely use (and not overuse) of major/minor.
Vocally this would kill with better phrasing, fleshing out the verse lines and not having those pauses.
Nice work.
Zeek Hey Zeek: I will probably give the vocal another go - I've only sung it a few times. Was under a deadline  Yeah, the phrasing can really be improved - I was fighting with myself while singing some of those line. Appreciate the comments - and nudge Scott
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