Scott,

I love this, what a sweet lyric!!

I think that chorus is a bit high for you, I sang lower harmony with you and I think if you do a low harmony in there with yourself....it will smooth out how far you are reaching (take the focus off of it), but I think that lift in the chorus is needed and sounds good....

Overall, this is a very nice song!!!

Tammy


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