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It took me a second but I realize there is a major issue with tense...the majority is in present tense but that first line is in past, so the listener is expecting the old story.
I thought I'd use "I bring my spoon to the knife fights" I think that keeps it in present tense, let's me keep the words short and clipped.
Thanks both of you for taken time to check this out.
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