Thanks Lisa, I gave this to my singer and he was dinking around and his wife said something to the effect of "Where'd I hear that before?" I googled the phrase. Nothing. That's a good sign.

We did this at practice tonight and I'm stoked. Blues rock, stanky, the singer worked off of a Tom Waits tune, and I'm very happy with the result. The chorus is slightly different but...y'all see. Next step is the mp3 forum.