James,

Even if you can't post a link..you can make great music!! LOL!!

This is a wonderful song and I will make a different comparison on purpose. This is like the first time I heard "SWITCHFOOT" in the movie "A Walk To Remember", this has that same pop feel of their songs in that movie. I am mentioning it because I think your song can be on that level. I think Zeek's chorus idea is valid because you need to up one more level because it is good enough to push.

That is just my opinion, but I think this sounds great and worth kicking it a little harder, but I really do like it!!!

Tammy


http://tammyjann.com/
https://soundcloud.com/tamsnumber4
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