Thank you Colin.

This crowd lyric is starting to make my brain ache lol. I can't see anything wrong with the first lyric. Why can't the crowd be on their feet? What I do know is, it scans well and sounds good so artistic licence should help smile

As far as musically goes yeah we are pretty much too far along for that. I think the best I could do is add more vocals and try some add lib type stuff on the last chorus.

Anyone think this kind of song would sell in the US?

I appreciate everyone's thoughts so far.

JD


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