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Riot Fest
by Gary E. Andrews - 06/21/26 10:51 PM
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by Gary E. Andrews - 06/19/26 06:43 PM
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Hey Stevie: Happy belated birthday buddy  Nice one! Great story telling here and I love the punchline of the singer's little joke. Also very effective how you slowed down and sped up in the last part of the song. If I have one minor nit it would be the use of the word "genetic". Introduces a little bit of a clinical feel there for me - and not really needed since you point out that it was the same disease that struck her mother. That's an awfully small thing - certainly didn't impact my enjoyment of the song - which I think is outstanding. Great idea to record on your birthday - makes it easier to remember when you did what.  Scott
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