Hey Stevie:

Happy belated birthday buddy smile

Nice one! Great story telling here and I love the punchline of the singer's little joke. Also very effective how you slowed down and sped up in the last part of the song.

If I have one minor nit it would be the use of the word "genetic". Introduces a little bit of a clinical feel there for me - and not really needed since you point out that it was the same disease that struck her mother.

That's an awfully small thing - certainly didn't impact my enjoyment of the song - which I think is outstanding. smile

Great idea to record on your birthday - makes it easier to remember when you did what. smile

Scott