Tony, I mostly critique from a commercial point of view, as that is the area that I am most interested in succeeding. Everything I've ever read or heard about the industry says that they want fresh ideas and imagery, and using cliches is the kiss of death.

Good luck with your writing. That's something we all need in this competitive business.


“I usually start with a title or maybe a little rhyme or phrase.” - Harlan Howard

Co-writing = Compromise!