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by JAPOV - 05/01/26 04:06 PM
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For Dom
by JAPOV - 04/30/26 09:52 PM
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Joined: Jul 2010
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Tony, You've strung together a string of cliches in tribute to a lost loved one and tied them altogether with a Hallmark sentiment: Heaven needed you more.
The song says someone made you happy, then died. Now you feel crappy but it's ok, 'cause Heaven needed that person more.
Is that how you would really feel? If so, then I guess the song is done. If not, rewrite. And tell a story. Don't substitute cliches for real feelings. You must have lost someone in your life. Write about how that left you feeling.
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