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Riot Fest
by Gary E. Andrews - 06/21/26 10:51 PM
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Hard-Fi
by Gary E. Andrews - 06/19/26 06:43 PM
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Hi Kevin,
Nice feel to this one. I think the music sounds like a really good match for the lyrics. These visits to our past seem to be making the rounds on the boards. Only nit I have is with the last verse (or bridge?)
"everything looks kinda different,
not much the same
in a funny kind of way
I don't even mind"
The first 2 lines state what one would pretty much expect. Line 3 is kind of a throw away and line 4 begs the question, Why? or Why not? Just some thoughts.
Ricki
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