Originally Posted by OskaSeason
Hi Scott...

I really like this song..The lyrics, your voice and the music.

I loved the harmonica especially.

Your voice sounds just right for the part.

My only nit if it is one is that when the vocals ended, I was waiting for more...

A final bit of clever wording..like a tag as to this 'hold that couln't be broken' but maybe thats just me.
Could be the way the last line flowed.. sort of like ending in mid air. Probally just me.. so ignor if I am alone..

But I love the song...

Roy


Hi Roy:

Sorry I jumped over your post. Haven't had my coffee yet!

The ending of this IS a little abrupt. I probably should have added one more measure of strumming before going into the last chord progression.

Since I don't write in country, I usually don't think in terms of tags. If I was going to use one here though I might consider doing something with this notion - He's found the gold. And now the listener thinks back and asks what he is digging for in the first verse. I think he's digging a hole to bury his gold in. grin

Thanks Roy!

Scott

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