Originally Posted by Calvin
Time To Whisper
© words and music by C. Stewart ( Oct. 18, 2009 )

I'm from the land of Whisper
Where, everything's a joke
The time clocks made of chocolate
So we don't work just smoke

I think it's time to whisper, don't you

Whisper has no president
But, none of us are broke
Everybody fell in love
Cause we don't work just smoke

I think it's time to whisper, don't you

I'm from the land of Whisper
A handshake and a toke
Making love's our only crime
And, we don't work just smoke

I think it's time to whisper, don't you

Bridge....
Little whispers make us laugh
Listen to the whisper in your mind
I hope you're the whispering kind

Instrumental break.....

Whisper is so beautiful
Hope this is where I croak
Silly smiles for miles and miles
Cause we don't work just smoke

I'm from the land of Whisper
Where, everything's a joke
The time clocks made of chocolate
So we don't work just smoke

I think it's time to whisper, don't you
Now's the time to whisper, I love you
Take the time to whisper, I love you
Take the time to whisper I love you

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Hi Calvin,

I saw this on Lyric 3, so I'll re-post my comments over there too. But in the meantime, I want to thank you for participating in the challenge and keeping us all on the edge of our respective musical seats. We never know where you're going to take us.

In fact, where do you ever come up with an image like this?

The time clocks made of chocolate

...Did you just watch Willy Wonka with your grandkids?

And you set up some interesting juxtapositions too...of really pretty language with more "pedestrian" lines:

Whisper is so beautiful
Hope this is where I croak

Still, the "Land of Whisper" sounds like quite the vacation spot. Any place you've got love and chocolate goin' on, you can count me in for sure. laugh

Thanks for sharing,
Beth


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