Originally Posted by Lynn Orloff
Good Saturday Morning,

Beth you had me laughing in your 1st line (the "Song Challenge Manual") laugh, wouldn't that be funny if a newbie thought one really existed, we could have fun w/that (sound of devilish laugh) according to Chapter 3, page 46, under the heading "derivatives and compounds of words/hooks and their application in challenges", etc. grin

Oh and to even consider that I could ever write a poem/song that starts with "sometimes I just don't want to rhyme" shocked well..it would have to go something like this

Sometimes I just don't want to rhyme
I'm in a rush I have no time
To find those words that somehow click
I sometimes don't have time for this
Forgive me but my life's so fast
I cannot rhyme nor meet the task
It doesn't mean I'm not inclined
It simply means I'm short on time
Oh my oh me how can it be
I rhymed just now unintentionally
I guess this means when low on time
I still can find the time to rhyme crazy


Hey there Lynn,

You are too much -- you can't even resist an offer NOT to rhyme! shocked laugh I was thinking more along the lines of:

Sometimes I just don't want to rhyme
I'm in a rush I have no time SHOES
To find those words that somehow click
I sometimes don't have time for this LUNCH
Forgive me but my life's so fast
I cannot rhyme nor meet the task IN-LAWS
It doesn't mean I'm not inclined
It simply means I'm short on time CASH
Oh my oh me how can it be
I rhymed just now unintentionally TIL BETH RUINED IT
I guess this means when low on time
I still can find the time to rhyme DRINK crazy

There now, that wasn't so hard was it? bite cool

Seriously, I appreciate you taking me up on THAT particular challenge and responding in True Lynn Form. In fact, "True Lynn Form" is listed in the Appendix of the Song Challenge Manual. Remind me to xerox that page for you...I'm sure you'd get a kick out of it wink !

As to your other Challenge offerings, I'll try to get to them soon....

Thanks for playing (so far!),
Beth


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